Thursday, November 4, 2010

Audience, Harmony, and a Point of Contention.

In our survey of rhetoric thus far, we have seen a variety of themes: morality, justice, knowledge, delivery, proofs, etc. It was only a matter of time until we finally saw an emphasis on audience. I think we have seen this foreshadowed in the work of Aristotle and his work on connections to audience via logos, pathos, ethos, and kairos. This emphasis on audience is particularly evident in the work of Perelman and Olberechts-Tyteca (see pages 200 through 204 in Herrick), in which they define three audiences: self, specific party, and universal. To me, this “thinking through of audience” was important because in considering these audiences there is an internal dialogue that must go on in one’s mind as he or she reconciles the best way to appeal to the audience---sort of a “monolectic” of sorts, which I also think is a testament to Bakhtin’s work (see pages 233 through 235 in Herrick). I also am reminded of Cicero with rebuttals and envision of stasis points—which are each reflective of audience considerations. I think the recognition and use of these evaluative mechanisms in one’s mind is something that Plato would have approved of given that his plays, in many ways, are essentially external representations of the mental processes that one must work through in working arguments out (negotiations) and in developing strategies towards audience connection.
A second theme I think we’re seeing in contemporary rhetoric is the recognition of rhetoric’s role in nearly any communication type---even in science, which is something that might not have set well with Bacon; it is a shift toward harmony. Herrick makes this point especially evident in the text (see pages 207 through 214). In his discussion, one piece that really stuck with me is how much truth there is to how inquiry and advocacy go hand-in-hand. If you are starting with some sort of premise or hypothesis, then indeed, you have already laid the groundwork for some form of persuasion. Thus, for me, I took this to mean that there is a degree of subjectivity in all objectivity. Thus, if total objectivity does not exist, I think absolute truth cannot exist (aside from religious arguments/dependent on one’s beliefs), which I am sure would have been an affront to Plato.  I can hear the Sophists cheering as I pose that assertion.  And, if that premise is true, that there is subjectivity in objectivity, then rhetoric and science have to be viewed as companions in order to produce something that is defendable and representative of the perceived truth---they do not have to continue to be viewed at odds as previously asserted.
A final comment that I will make relates to the excerpt from English Composition and Rhetoric, by Bain, found in Bizzell and Herzberg. It was good to finally see the origins of writing modes (description, narration, exposition, and persuasion). However, I do not agree that persuasion is its own mode.  All narration, description, and exposition, have some point, some piece of knowledge to be shared. And, in that sense, because there is something to be garnered--a purpose---I would argue that persuasion is at work in each of the other modes; it might not be as explicit as the "research essay," but it is there---like Aesop’s’ fables. They are stories, but they aim to teach a lesson, and so there is persuasion.  So, I am not currently sold on the idea of classifying persuasion as its own mode. Perhaps it is because of my position of hindsight, but even in looking Bain’s own words (i.e., Part 21 on p. 1148 in Bizzell and Herzberg), he defines a paragraph as something that is “understood to possess Unity; which implies a definite purpose, and forbids digression…”  If there is purpose, then isn’t there also persuasion? Whether you’re writing to inform or entertain, you are still persuading, right?  “Learn this, Enjoy this…”
Those are my thoughts for this week.

7 comments:

  1. Cris--Always enjoy your posts! This week, I'm drawn particularly to your discussion of science and objectivity--or its lack thereof. My first class in this program was Lang's Data and Text Mining. (I had absolutely no idea what I was getting myself into--but great class). It turns out that we spent a considerable amount of time dealing with data and how to create research questions and formulate methodologies to answer those questions. The class had a very quantitative approach, so I thought that my saving grace would be that the "answers" would at least be clear, right or wrong, objective. This did not prove the case. Even researching my own project, which dealt with data that was to be aggregated, I had to make rhetorical choices. I'm a firm believer that we need to follow research to where it leads us, despite our preconceived ideas, but when we get our results, how do we present that information? Numbers or objective information is one thing, but the words we use to surround that objective information is another story. No matter how careful we are, there will always be an element of subjectivity in science or report writing. We make word choices, select content, and maybe more importantly omit content. So I think that all of these choices at our disposal make our writing, even scientific writing, rhetorical.

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  2. Cris, You said "However, I do not agree that persuasion is its own mode. All narration, description, and exposition, have some point, some piece of knowledge to be shared." I agree with you. Persuasion seems to be more of a thread that runs throughout all the types, connecting them in a way, than a separate category.

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  3. You make a great point about persuasion. What isn't persuasion? Even selecting "facts" from data is a form of persuasion. A piece of poetry is an argument, or piece of persuasion that the poet's viewpoint is valid, etc. ...

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  4. What, would you say, today, are the humanities for? We're moving into a world that is network-centric. See http://www.alex-reid.net/2010/11/thinking-in-public-cloud-based-composition.html. How does this change psychology and Bain for rhet/comp and knowledge-making?

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  5. Rich,

    The things that immediately come to mind are that there are more tensions to reconcile and there is an increased emphasis on iteration. Cumulatively, it represents a continuing shift from thinking about composition in term of modal outcomes and goals to more about process and rigor?

    Cris

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  7. I can see your point about persuasion being a part of every essay, but I think when an essay is given the sole purpose of persuading the rhetoric being used is different than in an informative or descriptive essay. Yes, we are always trying to prove our point with facts and analysis, but we may not be writing with the intention to sway the readers opinion like we would if we were writing a persuasive essay.

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